Film Opening Draft 1

This is the first draft of our film opening. We don't need to alter it that much to get to our final piece. However, the ending of this edit does need changing because of it's finality. In this the opening has a very definite ending with Rose looking towards the doctor. However it was pointed out to us that this wouldn't work in the context of a full film as it is very difficult to move on from this point. We have decided instead to change the final scene, by adding in more dialogue and cutting out, in order to open it up and make it clear that there is action beyond this point.